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Tormenting a Queen

FimFiction Link - Short ID: 486555/tormenting-a-queen

Published: Jan '21

Review in No. 37108689
I was surprised. The prose is not great, many mistakes and redundancies, and sometimes (especially in dialogues) it can come off as a bit forced..
But holy shit the PACING is absolutely perfect. No scene lasted too long or too little, and the story itself (for what it is, AKA a sex and torture fic) is solid too. Not too long so I recommend it. Steel yourself for the prose at the beginning and let it grab you, it's a good one.