/mlp/ Fanfic Reviews

Within The Seas of The Galaxies

FimFiction Link - Short ID: 41152/within-the-seas-of-the-galaxies

Published: Jul '12Mar '13

Review in No. 39179239
The first half of this fic is riddled with errors, but has a lot of cute scenes. Conflicts are set up and resolved at a very rapid pace, notably because Twilight and Luna talk to each other about their fears, hopes and misunderstandings. Who would have thought?

The second half has fewer errors, but follows traditional story beats and is generally not worth reading although there is no punishment for doing so except the march of time. Celestia giving Twilight "the talk" is a cue to drop the fic, and later Twilight's statement for her plan caps it. All goes according to the characters intent without surprises.