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Familiar

FimFiction Link - Short ID: 386643/familiar

Published: Sep '17

Review in No. 39241175
An AI is programmed and commanded to unconditionally love Rainbow Dash. Rainbow Dash is Rainbow Dash, so the AI takes the only escape hatch available to it: suicide. The story is, or at least tries to be, serious, but I couldn't help but find this aspect of it hilarious.
The scifi concept is perfectly fine, as usual I'm disappointed in how the story takes almost no time to bloom and is almost explained in a lecture. The parts that were shown definitely made me feel like a compulsion to rescue purplesmart from her new hell, or at least give her a nice hug.