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Fractured Sunlight

FimFiction Link - Short ID: 234937/fractured-sunlight

Published: Sep '15Feb '16

Review in No. 39397398
That was, well, very nicely handled and written. I don't have much negative things to say about the book, loved reading it and loved the story.
There's just, this weird feeling that despite the conflict, I never really feared for the characters or the end of the story. Maybe I'm just jaded.
On a side note, the physical edition of the book is okay but the stretched drawings felt weird and I don't really understand this choice :x