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FimFiction Link - Short ID: 525581/burnout

Published: Oct '22

Review in No. 39595608
You know that experiment where a rat is presented with two buttons? One gives them food, the other one stimulates the pleasure centre of the brain. The rats starve to death every time. Imagine the same, but with unicorns (and alicorns).
This short one-shot follows Sweetie Belle, who has not given in on the temptation of using the super pleasure and fulfillment spell, visiting the remains of unicorns who have perished after burning out.
It's entertaining for barely breaking a thousand words. I would like to see the concept explored in a full story.