/mlp/ Fanfic Reviews

Would It Matter If I Was?

FimFiction Link - Short ID: 289205/would-it-matter-if-i-was

Published: Sep '15

Review in No. 39605140
I just noticed 'Would it matter if I was?' is on the starter kit. I happened to read it the other day and I hold a very strong belief that it shouldn't be on there. It wasn't bad, but it was nothing more than "alright".
Nothing about it stands out in the sea of 1 on 1 dialogue oneshots, and Twilight and Fluttershy spend half of it snapping at each other, one of them being presented as obviously in the right.
It makes one good point at the beginning of the story, and... there are also other words after it.