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The Thin Line Between Wife And Death

FimFiction Link - Short ID: 385565/the-thin-line-between-wife-and-death

Published: Sep '17

Review in No. 39963445
The Thin Line Between Wife And Death is a 17k word story about the risks presented when Applejack and Rainbow Dash's personalities clash in regards to sex.
This story is very good. It also is, in contrast to what the starting third may suggest, quite funny.
Without spoiling much, the story goes back and forth between serious and deep, and wacky and mildly insane. You may think this would create a mood whiplash in detriment to the story's enjoyment, but King of Beggars weaves everything seamlessly. Goes on to prove that just because something isn't serious, it doesn't mean you don't have to take it seriously.
Overall, I think this is a good, if simple, character analysis of both Applejack and Rainbow Dash, as well as why in most circumstances, a relationship between them doesn't work.
If you're in the mood for good drama, introspection, humour, and some raunchiness, this is perfect for you.