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Please don't do this

FimFiction Link - Short ID: 537302/please-dont-do-this

Published: Jun '23

Review in No. 40018801

Twilight casts one of her horror fic spells and realizes she's words on a screen. It's a delightful breath of fresh air in the stale horror oneshot genre, but the intense meta plot somewhat spoils things as it strains the suspension of disbelief with Twilight realizing she's not real and is just on a horseword website.