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FimFiction Link - Short ID: 536900/moonsilver

Published: Jun '23

Review in No. 40317289
This is much more bitter than the pony stuff that I usually like, but it gets this bitterness across so well that I'd be remiss not to include it in this post. The short scenes that feel almost as if they were only brief flashes from the greater story, the sparse descriptions, and the sharp conversations full of interrupted sentences and unspoken words – it all plays into the fic's tone, and I don't think it could've been more focused in its execution than it already is.