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FimFiction Link - Short ID: 493904/misaligned

Published: Apr '21

Review in No. 37440636
'Misaligned' is an extremely short one-thousand word oneshot about a Lovecraftian being's imminent awakening and how Twilight thwarts it, presented in an entirely comical fashion, without spending much time in establishing anything more than what's necessary for the "punchline." Some of the jokes did make me smile, though I have to admit others felt forced. Luna's OOC lulrandumb behavior in her letter and the eldritch being saying "poop" comes to mind. What's with this author's infatuation with juvenile swears?
Overall: 7/10 Don't expect anything extraordinary, but for a fic you can finish in literal minutes, it works well enough. Can recommend.