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The Well

FimFiction Link - Short ID: 342673/the-well

Published: Aug '16Sep '16

Review in No. 41216314
The Well is a 2,7k word Dark Horror story. In it, Apple Bloom gets lost.
Applejack's in the Everfree, looking for Apple Bloom. She starts hearing her sister calling in distress, and she follows her voice to a well, where Bloom seems to be trapped.
Moody and creepy. Fast paced, but not rushed. Just how I like 'em. There's not a wasted line, I feel. It all build this sense of dread and worry as you wonder what happened to Apple Bloom, how did she end up in that well... And if that even is Apple Bloom.
Give it a read. It's quite enjoyable.